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The Enigmatic Snow
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The Enigmatic Snow |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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The Enigmatic Snow Would that I could pen one poem in luminous and grand-immortal rhyme writ large and sent upon the wind in prayer to the silent, boundless sky, were we have so often asked the why of that which is and could have been, in words to make love truly matter more for her than all else she has ever known; but here in the darkest passing of the storm, when even the shadows hold their breath, words and meaning seem lost forever, and softly, softly, silent, and slow falls the enigmatic snow deeply indifferent to our dreams. --- b. e. adams (1/10/2015) |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just beautiful! enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Bruce,each day you are able to come up with words that seem to just get better.But one is just as sweet and as lovely as the other. How you manage this is beyond my small mind.Just know how talented you are.I hope you have a special book so many more can buy and share these poems.Jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you Kat ! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
... and, a most special thanks to you, Jo for your lovely thoughts and words. If I 'pen' at all well it is because I have walked a 40-something Zen Tao (path of 'enlightenment') with Nature as my quintessential teacher and muse; and because I have loved and lost the two finest ladies in the history of the universe along the way. Hopefully, I have learned something therein?! [I imagine the best writers have all known the greatest loves and losses] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Top notch writing, Bruce. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many thanks, JP ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
To me, the Best of yours thus far, my friend.. very well done! j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful write, dear Bruce. But I disagree with your statement that the snow is indifferent to your dreams ... see how profoundly it inspired you! Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Ms. M. ! |
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