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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2014-12-23 10:19 AM

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Let love inspire you:

wrap your words in heart colors

peace expands within

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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2014-12-23 10:46 AM

Beautiful Margherita.A nice way to start the blue pages. Jo

Margherita
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2 posted 2014-12-23 11:06 AM

Thank you, dear Martyjo. Sending much love your way.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-12-23 11:24 AM

A lot of depth within the lines of this simple, but very poignant poem, Margherita. May Christmas and the new year be good to you.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Margherita
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4 posted 2014-12-23 11:33 AM

I much enjoyed your loving comment, dear Jerry, thank you from my heart.

quote:
May Christmas and the New Year be good to you

And may these blessings be yours too.

Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

5 posted 2014-12-23 12:09 PM

so much love here, this is outstanding,
merry Christmas

yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2014-12-23 09:24 PM

Life can be so complex and yet you have put it so simply, so brilliantly, beautiful.

All the best to you during this holiday season.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2014-12-23 10:23 PM

Indeed...you have been full of senryus...and we love them!

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

8 posted 2014-12-23 11:14 PM

Very nicely done!

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

9 posted 2014-12-24 12:36 PM

With this shortened type of poetry it is often difficult to warm to, but here you have three lines of such potency that it isn't. The real beauty is, 'peace expands within'. It certainly doesn't expand around tables of mutual hate.

Margherita
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10 posted 2014-12-24 01:33 PM

Thank you all my dear Poet friends, Yann, Lori, Karilea, Charly and Redstart for your most kind comments.

Peace and Joy.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2014-12-24 10:18 PM

the openness of your heart always shows, my friend...much enjoyed.

j.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2014-12-25 05:15 AM

Short, sweet, full of your spirit. My kind of poem.
Ida

Margherita
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13 posted 2014-12-26 02:17 PM

Thank you so much, my dear friends Jimmy and Ida, for your most loving and kind comments.

All the best to you!

Love,
Margherita

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