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One Pine Forest (December passing)
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One Pine Forest (December passing) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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One Pine Forest December is inscrutable as the winter wind that plays its sad laments on bare-bone trees and the vacant moon which sails the still, chill sea with a vast starless sky of tattered clouds rolling forever in from nowhere and on to nowhere. A frozen silence slips through this frosted forest world around one bleak and lonely pine standing apart yet unyielding ... we are one. --- b. e. adams (12/20/2014) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is much beauty in the starkness you paint, and the stillness has a certain elegance. Very pretty... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you ! December is difficult but perhaps not as bleak, bare, and bereft of all hope as those that Anton Pavlovich Chekhov 'wrote' ?! (there is minimalistic beauty and Zen) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love to read you and place myself there in midst of your scenery, inhaling all the silent, peaceful beauty. Captivating! Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Margherita ... glad you liked it ! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so beautiful, I can feel the place, yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you, Yann ! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
sets the scene for the mind to get lost within or found. RS |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you ! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
You always paint such lovely pictures with your words. -Trina |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks, Trina ! I was once an oil painter ... more 'challenging' and interesting to 'paint' with a word-brush of light, though ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wonderful imagery here, Bruce. Felt a little shiver. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you, Ida ! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have been missing it seems but I always read.Sometimes I just do not take the time to post. You are one I always read but sometimes just do not stop topost. Best to you, Jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks for readin & postin' on this one, Jo ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done, my friend ... one lone sentinel left in a forest no longer there ... cool... j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you !! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
wonderful poem, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Kat ! |
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