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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-01-30 08:38 PM

Into Her Presence

At the time I didn't
know it but the silk lady
would be meeting me later that night
when the moon would gain
its proper alignment
in the skies,
her kisses to be delicious
like dark chocolate
caressing the milky way
and her smile as warm and bright
as the stars on a clear winter night
guiding me into her presence
and reminding me
that angels are watching over me
and take pleasure in providing me
with the desires of my heart.

JamesLee
29January
2014

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2014-01-30 10:01 PM

Aww ....I do so love the romance.

mrfer
New Member

since 2014-01-30

Posts 1

2 posted 2014-01-30 11:01 PM

really cool how it's not just another corny love poem. great job

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2014-01-31 01:50 AM

Simultaneously peaceful and exciting, James. Beautiful!

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-01-31 05:43 AM

Excellent poetry, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2014-01-31 08:57 AM

quote:
that angels are watching over me
and take pleasure in providing me
with the desires of my heart.

This is as lovely as it gets, dear James. And your gratitude makes it all the more beautiful.

Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2014-02-01 11:07 AM

delicious indeed, the poem creates harmony and happiness, thanks for the beautiful read

yann

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2014-02-01 09:09 PM

Lush that you are ... (heh, heh), I do have to agree with Blues ... enjoyed, my friend...

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2014-02-02 09:41 AM

I'm with J and Blues (heh, heh)

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2014-02-04 09:30 PM

Thank you Blues Serenade, mrfer, Owl, Jerry, Margherita, 2islander2, jwesley and Lori for the wonderful responses...James

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