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broken morning
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broken morning |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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broken morning a thousand pieces of bad luck surrounded me this morning they exploded with a "twang-swish" skating in slow motion to all corners of my room with broom and pan in hand i looked down and caught a thousand me's staring back waiting for my next careless move "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am impressed by the fantastic imagery. Great to see you back on these pages after a rather long pause.  Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love this poem! We have all had a similar mishap. Most all of us just #*!!^@!*. You on the other hand went on to produce this little gem right here. Write on, Poet! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gotta love it and I do. Interesting take on the mindset of the one writing this. I, of course, got off on the last four lines. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I can't go there, friend, but positive thoughts are heading your way. Powerful writing. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thanks all...I've returned to try to find my misplaced muse...anybody seen her??? "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Impressive, Packratmike. Ida |
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