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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
funny crazy and half insane isn't that the way the the games played a roll of the dice a flip of the card they always said that she hardly tries wondering again' if the tale ever ends changing the tale to begin again ace is high and your low in the hole nothing to wager less the devil get your soul folding on your last dime giving up isn't always a crime deceit yourself as the barren lay cold and all along fearing what you don't know shooting blanks as the fragile egg breaks a forlorn misfortune and accept defeat now I wash my hands growing weary of your Pete and Repeat are you hands clean now....??? as you pretend to care? same dance to a different song can't decide who's right or wrong the sage once said what is said is said drawing the line where black meets red kingsangel |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Kickass poetry in my view, kingsangel. Keep writing. Watch others. But in the end, be yourself completely. I liked "ol girl." If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
Thank you Jerry.... I wrote this in a hurry at friends there is an insightful message there...but I don't think he message got through though I tried .... "folding on your last dime" "giving up isn't always a crime" kingsangel |
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