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The Gift of Again
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The Gift of Again |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 To your eyes, I am hidden To your dream I do dwell To your skin I’m, forbidden To your heart I am, held It shouldn’t be legal to give away, hope Faith is a reverie just, trying to cope Need will not ever be quite good as want Nor will the place of our wish, that we haunt Life was made simply to be more or less The perfect of anything makes us regress The ditch in the road is why, there’s a trail A lesson is merely the flip side of fail Does matter, even matter inside of a void What is the penalty when time is destroyed Sometimes we don’t even know when we borrow All of my, want is to give you tomorrow |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Always enjoy your work, Rich. Lovely picture as well. Ida |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
that is very sweet of you to say Ida, thank you kindly..  |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It's brilliant! Every stanza! Much enjoyed your poem! And the picture is so atmospheric! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Especially love your opening lines, and your ending is exquisite in it's timeless desire. Your poetry is very special Richy, and makes me feel so many things. It's all good, really really good.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you very much Gale what a nice thing to say.. it's great to meet you, i hope you enjoy yourself here.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
You’re very welcome Lori.. I’m glad you’re still here.. your smile is the canvas, to my brush.. Have a wonderful weekend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Poet, would you mind to sit with me on that bench and to read this beautiful poem again LIVE? Exquisite! Margherita |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A special story in your beautiful style of placing words. And it happens to mean a lot to me,as I have a few benches that come to mind.Thank you once again Richy,you still amaze me. jo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
its a date Margy.. at some point in our everlast we'll have plenty of time to sit and just enjoy the poem of our being play out before us.. i'll pick you up at quarter to nine.. wear red |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Jo.. arent benches wonderful.. a place for two in the living room of green earth.. just have to watch out for the splinters.. |
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