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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2014-10-10 07:08 AM


And I try
to follow my heart
but I find myself
losing my mind

I can't decide
which piece
I should follow

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2014-10-10 07:46 AM


A perfect representation of what happens when we are stuck between rationality and emotions. Meditation could help to find the right balance maybe.

Love,

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-10-10 09:18 AM


I absolutely, one hundred percent, agree with this summation, Trina . . .

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2014-10-10 12:05 PM


Emotion, tempered by common sense is the best way to go, hard at times, but having the heart alone rule the situation, is generally a losing proposition.

j

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2014-10-11 09:09 AM


Trina
you take the complex and render it down to a perfect essence.  And something in my head goes "ding" when I realize OMG I do that too!
I love your insights. Always look forward to reading you!

Lori

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2015-08-17 10:16 PM


very nice...james
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