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Open Poetry #49

Living it in between....

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

0 posted 2014-08-10 03:29 PM

Going deaf now
your words to painful
for me to hear

thought it was love
of some sort
whispering through
the air

I heard it there

on a rain filled
sunny day
when the weather
is only good
outside

but seasons change
and lives rearrange
with out notice
ducking out

you see ...

I never liked
center stage

and who knew it was always your game?

kingsangel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2014-08-10 05:45 PM

Telling it like it is.
That game sux...big time.

Good venting...

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2014-08-10 05:58 PM

Enjoyed,jo

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

3 posted 2014-08-28 09:40 PM

Thank you both glad you liked!! ...always was good at telling it like it is just decided that it would sound with some prose put to it!!!

kingsangel

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2014-09-12 01:22 AM

Yep, seasons change. A good rant. Good luck to you.

miscellanea

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2014-09-12 08:09 AM

but seasons change
and lives rearrange
with out notice

I can't say I enjoyed this because I identify with it too much... and that stings.

Great write!!

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

6 posted 2021-03-17 04:00 AM

this is my old profile and I wrote this and it just gave me chills, wow.

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