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Whispers Have Power
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Whispers Have Power |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 it was the sixties a flower child and I were discussing the revolution and what it meant we agreed it was about new morals as we spoke her eyes intently searched mine I got up to leave she spoke; her voice whisper fresh as was Eve’s was before the fall I obediently sat back down ©January 6, 2014 / Jerry at Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-22-2014 09:27 AM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
very intriguing making for a host of thoughts both innocent and sinful  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I prefer sinful, Emma. But at my age it is all in my mind. Well, most of it. Heh.Heh ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A persuasive age Jerry, very well documented in your poetry. Had I been in your situation, I would have sat back down too. When one is under the spell of an intoxicating love, one should not drive. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
And now wouldn't I just love to know what she had to say. It's always the quiet ones... Very intriguing! "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Enjoyed this much, Jerry! Thanks for sharing! ) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks go out to Blues, Aenea, and Gale. I appreciate your comments very much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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