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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2014-07-20 05:46 AM

perhaps it was just something in your eyes
saying hello, whispering quiet
or maybe it was your breast friends there
swelling into a welcoming smile

maybe it was how you played country songs
with fingers that knew the juke box
like a familiar violin, with special wood
that you would often take time to worship

perhaps it was how you licked the salty brim
from your glass, like it was something gold
then gave away a glance like candy treats
before you leaned over low and touched morning

with just enough words spoken, to be lovely

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Dark (country girl saloon)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2014-07-20 03:45 PM

Cowboy up and dosey doe why don't ya.
So nice to peek in your innuendo, ds.
Missed you around these parts.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-20-2014 04:29 PM).]

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2014-07-21 07:42 AM

Nice to see you again, Dark. Lovely poem.

Owl

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2014-08-06 12:03 PM

Daddy...you give new meaning to the term Tequila Sunrise.

That's all I'm going to say...

Your roads...ever a delight~*~

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

4 posted 2014-08-28 09:34 PM

and all that in two minutes no doubt....reminds me of the good old days of happy hour and how much I miss those old juke boxes ...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2014-08-29 07:55 AM

Thank you ladies....

You make me smile

Daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2014-12-20 05:53 PM

Now see what I have found today, this is as charming as it gets. You are missed, dear D., you bring smiles with your poetic excellence and uniqueness.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2014-12-20 07:07 PM

You're still at it and this is a gem.
Haven't read your work for some time.....very nice.
Saloon girl.........oh those swinging doors.....ya just never know.

true love never looks after it's own interests

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

8 posted 2014-12-20 07:12 PM

It's another tequila sunrise.....man I love them, and this

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2014-12-21 02:10 PM

Oooohhh...a present!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

10 posted 2014-12-21 04:21 PM

i'd have to say it was the breasts swelling if she had that lovely pair the rest would prob follow.

RS

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

11 posted 2014-12-21 08:38 PM

I have missed your writing. Thanx for the treat- Lovely, as always.

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