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Open Poetry #49

Uncross the Stars

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2014-07-09 09:18 PM

  Uncross the Stars

A bright forest moon
illuminates infinite
wilderness paths to
    nowhere
beneath corridors of
silvered clouds and
dancing constellations.
In this brief Summer
of the spirit-heart,
tell me how to
uncross the stars
and keep your love
before the coming of
life's endless Winter.

               --- b. e. adams (7/9/2014)

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2014-07-09 09:21 PM

Oh my....but that is beautiful, dreampoet...the vulnerability and the longing here...rings a deep silver chord in the soul....

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2014-07-09 11:44 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment on this 'write!'

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2014-07-11 07:42 PM

Your poems radiate off these blue pages.
This is breathtaking and so very beautiful.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2014-07-12 02:24 AM

Just beautiful, Bruce.
Ida

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