the night sky and her lover

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tracie66
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0 posted 2012-01-28 05:10 AM

as the sun sets
and the moon settles into the indigo sky above
I'm captivated by it's radiance
mesmerised by it's presence
and this moment in time is such solace
to my ever chaotic life
I give a sigh as I marvel at it’s dominance
in this beautiful celestial haven above
the night sky and her lover
a picture of pure ecstasy

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-01-28 05:29 AM

Yes, tracie66, it is moments such as these that poets are born. These moments can fill you heart with wonderment. You conveyed those sentiments wonderfully.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Nicole
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2 posted 2012-01-28 07:50 AM

There is just something about the night, and the moon, that begs to be written - and you have captured that so well here. Very nice

ebonygirl
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3 posted 2012-01-28 11:45 AM

Tracy, enjoyed the night sky you painted so nicely.
Ms. E

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2012-01-28 12:03 PM

I love the night too, Tracie. Lovely, serene
picture you've painted here.
Ida

jwesley
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5 posted 2012-01-28 12:33 PM

Wonderful, my friend...really like how you did this...

j.

tracie66
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6 posted 2012-01-28 08:50 PM

Jerry - thanks my friend for such a wonderful response I appreciate it.

Nicole - I'm moonstruck thats for sure, I appreciate your lovely comment.

Ms E - I'm so very happy that you enjoyed this, thanks for reading and responding.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

tracie66
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Australia

7 posted 2012-01-28 08:52 PM

Ida - so very glad you liked this, thanks for your reply.

J - my friend I'm so thankful for your lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2012-01-30 06:41 AM

Ms T...this one is almost erotic but with gauze drapery...enjoyed it

ice
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9 posted 2012-01-30 08:02 AM

I love how poets think outside the box.
It makes the universe what it is...more lovely than what is normally seen.

You have done well at this, tracie.

Thanks you for writting your thoughts down in verse.

[This message has been edited by ice (01-30-2012 10:32 AM).]

tracie66
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10 posted 2012-01-31 04:02 AM

Daark - Thankyou and I'm pleased you enjoyed this.

Ice - Your comment so lovely, I appreciate it very much

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Michael

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11 posted 2012-01-31 11:11 AM

Ah, a lovely image this... The moon in the indigo sky shining brighter and brighter as night sneaks in. Beautiful.

Michael

suthern

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12 posted 2012-01-31 03:53 PM

I'm captivated by it's radiance
mesmerised by it's presence

And with your words, you captivate us. *S* This is beautiful!

tracie66
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13 posted 2012-02-01 04:01 AM

Dear Micheal & Suthern thanks to both of you for your lovely comments & taking the time to check this out, glad you both enjoyed

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JL
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14 posted 2012-02-02 06:27 AM

Captivating, fascinating, mesmerizing,
this night sky of yours.
Very nice read!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

tracie66
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15 posted 2012-02-03 01:33 AM

thanks JL i'm glad you enjoyed - thanks for stopping by

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Alison

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16 posted 2012-02-05 02:17 PM

... and just like that, Tracie makes magic!

tracie66
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Australia

17 posted 2012-02-06 05:43 AM

thanks Alison, you're too kind

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Margherita
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18 posted 2012-02-11 03:40 AM

This is enchanting and I felt as if Marge's spirit was dancing between the lines.

Very captivating.

Margherita

2islander2
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19 posted 2012-02-11 10:44 AM

hello tracie, il like the beauty of the scene and the free feelings of skies observed, thanks for the beautiful write,

yann

Klassy Lassy
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20 posted 2012-02-11 07:09 PM

How bereft we could be without the moon to bewitch us with it's romance and magic--full of secrets and momentary madness, that old man in the moon! Sometimes, he's just a baby, but either way, he's good at looking over one's shoulder as she writes poetry.

I'm so glad he's impartial in his inspiration. I love the stolen moments you capture here.

tracie66
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Australia

21 posted 2012-02-12 04:47 AM

Dear Yann & J - Thank you both for your wonderful comments, they are much appreciated.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JamesMichael
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22 posted 2012-02-19 09:16 PM

Enjoyed...James

MICHELMAS
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23 posted 2012-02-20 05:04 AM

Shadows beneath the Moon
lovely
Michael

aujussy wolf

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24 posted 2012-02-21 02:38 AM

Wonderful Poem, the moon is amazing.

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

tracie66
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25 posted 2012-03-06 08:53 PM

James, Michael & Aujussy Wolf - thank you for you kind replies and I'm pleased that you enjoyed this.

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