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Moonlit Path |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England 
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Moonlit Path Night falls and draws the dark curtain On things that are, and things that were Owl calls, her silent wings unheard Will timid vole the daylight see On leathered flight, no need for sight The bat detects the insect drone And so alone dewpond reflects The crescent moon that wanes too soon In forest hush your blanket leaves And dappled beams on shadowed face And is love lost within the maze As tangled brambles tear your skin Till surely there a moonlit path Weaves to your door, to stay once more |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
As always, you paint a beautiful word picture for your fans and passer-by's. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I really love the visions you paint...they are romantically beautiful...filling all the senses with life...well done |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Michael It really is another world at night isn't it but it's quite fascinating all the things that are happening out there in nocturnal world of the animal kingdom. This is quietly beautiful. Loved it! Eric |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I've always enjoyed a moonlit path... enjoyed your poem, Michael. Ms. E |
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rabittlover Junior Member
since 2012-04-07
Posts 46 |
Nice descriptions of nature. Keep on the following the moonlit path. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very romantic and captivating imagery. Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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