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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2012-05-01 10:20 PM

(I lost my mom four years ago and so I wrote this in honor of her. Love you mom)

Underneath the canvas of the night
The iridescent moon glowing bright
With the falling stars that make no sound
I can feel your presence all around

Left behind and wondering why
It was so hard to say goodbye
But knowing where you are right now
Has brought comfort to us somehow

Your sweet smile still lights up the night
And lets us know that you're alright
Your energy still fills the home
In every single room we roam

Your baby soft hands I held in mine
Such comfort and nurturing I did find
A smile on your face we always would see
Such joy you brought to your family

But it's your voice I miss most of all
Every day I made a special call
To check on you both and let you know
I'm thinking of you and love you so

Although you're gone and no longer here
I still talk to you and shed a tear
My secrets and thoughts to you I send
Someday I know I'll see you again

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-05-01 10:30 PM

*sigh*...The love you have for your mother shines brightly in these beautiful words...very emotional and very well written

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2012-05-01 11:10 PM

I felt every emotion so strongly, i lost my father a couple of yrs ago, still have my mother but she is so ill now. I can relate to so many of the words you wrote. Nothing replaces losing a parent, well written.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-05-01 11:50 PM

Beautiful tribute to one you love so deeply.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-02 05:55 AM

A beautiful tribute to a loving mother. Would that everyone would have such a mom to write poems about.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

5 posted 2012-05-02 06:12 AM

I lost my mother aged 17, many many moons ago....but I still remember her ,in the wind, the clouds,the sea.....it never goes.

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

6 posted 2012-05-02 06:19 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments. I'm sorry for your loss dreamgirl and Michaelmas. It's not an easy thing to go through. But great memories never fade away and keep the spirit alive.

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