enjoying a flower and a spark

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Open Poetry #48

enjoying a flower and a spark

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2012-04-30 10:21 AM

wave to the sun
kiss the ground
taste the water sweet
and feel the lovely breeze

for life is flower
and a flower is like a spark
both withereth fast and die.

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-04-30 10:34 AM

So few words to express such a powerful thought...we need to stop and see the beauty of life and nature around us...

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2012-04-30 10:45 AM

fine (philosophically succinct) 'write' !

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-04-30 01:18 PM

Hah! Perfect . . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

4 posted 2012-04-30 02:24 PM

Enjoy Mother Nature and what she has to offer. Enjoyed.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2012-04-30 11:32 PM

You just earned five extra "made me smile" points!

Enjoyed.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2012-05-01 02:18 AM

I think I'd take the flower as it might last longer than a spark.
Great illustration.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2012-05-01 02:33 AM

Enjoyed your poem.
ms. e

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