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Wind Blows
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Wind Blows |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Wind Blows When the wind blows strong chimes dance their music making a theme song become a classic It caresses leaves twisting them about touching it receives whistles in cry out It moans through windows leaving eerie sounds once soft then bellows the beating heart abounds In front of fire lit warmth through me flows and there I will sit when the strong wind blows Karen Mc Neil April 27, 2012 |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Aahhh...I can hear those chimes through your words...lovely!  Amaryllis |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully done are these pensive thoughts of nature's commune. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Personally, I love the wind! Not when it's too strong mind you, but when it's strong enough to whisper about the powers of creation. I find it refreshing as it cleans the surface of the earth and breathes pollen across the land to extend life for miles. Love the comforting end of this piece Karen. Well done! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Amaryllis I love chimes and have 4 of them hanging in my bedroom window...when the wind blows from the north I go to sleep to the music they create...Thank you JerryPat2 Thank you...I love nature even at its most powerful... Kat Thank you...I am glad you like it... Eric When I was getting ready to move to Alberta from New Brunswick people out here warned me about the wind...it made me laugh because I love the wind...it makes me think of sitting on the cliffs of Cape Breton watching a storm come off the ocean...*sigh* Hugs dear Eric...right now the wind is howling and I am listening to the music of the chimes |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hope you're on the porch, breathing it in ... it could blow non-stop as far as I'm concerned... enjoyed. j. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I'm with you there...there is something magical listening to the wind carry messages...*grin* there I go to fantasy...or is it? Thank you for reading j |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I read about cello's and chimes tonight...James |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I enjoyed this read very much. Not too crazy about the wind as it seems to blow pretty hard in my neck of the woods, keeping us indoors and just watching as the trees sway. Would rather be outdoors instead! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
We have lots of wind here as well but not as dangerous as other place...I love the wind because it reminds me of the ocean... thanks all for reading... |
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