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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-04-27 10:51 AM

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In a house built
Entirely of wood

With a wooden fence
No garage
In the middle of nowhere
I noticed in detail

We sit at a table
In a kitchen equally old

I am here because
My heart says
You are beautiful

And you opened the door
To let me into your world

I am here because
You wanted me
To be here

And the rest
Is whatever next
Will happen

.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-04-27 11:10 AM

Very good! The open minded approach from the heart.
Like the images leading to that ending.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-04-27 03:38 PM

So sweet and tender...I am sure she feels the same...an old house of wood...what better place to share love...well done

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

3 posted 2012-04-27 04:10 PM

A tender hope here, and a tentative trust...enjoyed

Amaryllis

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-04-28 09:38 AM

Way to go, my friend...full agreement here.

j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2012-04-29 01:05 PM

Love the "lost in time" feel of this, John.
Ida

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