Open Poetry #48 |
..to comfort |
Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
whisper to me, moon tell me she lies in bed wishing for a dream of me--to please her heart, to heal old wounds; to simply comfort ~~ ..(C)2008/2012 Spiros Zafiris..channeled; spirit Harmony; reaching into the poet's heart ~~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I found this oh so lovely and touching....very impressed, I can't stop reading it. Beautiful, tender. Bravo! Amaryllis |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thank you Amaryllis..you are too kind.. ..>>spiros ~~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautiful, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks Kat..>>much appreciation..! ..>>spiros ~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think many have felt the same. Very well done Spiros. Great mood in such an economy of words. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..friend Eric, i'm pleased much you like this one..>>spiros ~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heartbreaking, honest and wishful. May your words come true for you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This was very tender, sad, and hopeful. Sweet, i too liked this very much! Thank you for sharing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...to simply comfort. That in itself says it all. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I agree with Sunshine...what a wonderful way to start my day...I am a day dreamer so this poem works for me day and night... |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thank you Jerry, dreamgal, Sunshine, and startime..you are all so kind..>>spiros ~~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Your words are comforting, Spiros. Enjoyed, ms. E |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Spiros, this poem makes me want to do a watercolor Amaryllis |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thank you Ms.E and Amaryllis ..i'm pleased this tanka of mine is so well received..i'm pleased, too, that it has inspired you, Amaryllis..thanks again..>>spiros |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah ... wonderful said, my friend, and so simply. j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mr. jwesley and James..>>pleased, too, you two have read my poem..thanks much ..spiros ~~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mr. jwesley and James..>>pleased, too, you two have read my poem..thanks much ..spiros ~~ |
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