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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-27 09:10 AM

we are walking through a meadow
as we walk we touch each other simply
a brush of shoulders
soft, oh so soft hand on my arm
the day is cloudy
rain peppers us; we make a run
seeking shelter
we are soaked, you
in that thin, scooped-neck dress
clings to your wetter
it is August hot
rain feels good on our skin
we take refuge beneath a massive oak
you smile, tiptoe up
molest my throat with your kisses
your hand grazes my Levi's, then,
both hands lift your delicious'
for my leering assessment, still smiling.
you release them to reach behind you
the sound of your dresses' zipper
catches my broad-minded
holding your arms straight in the air
I unrobe you from your altogether
smiling, you stand before me in your open
you kneel on rain-soaked grass
I, weak-kneed, lean against the oak
soon I am dressed down to my birthright
Adam and Eve neath yet another tree
you took a bite of the forbidden
swallowed your expectations
the grass a cushion for our delight
with every nook and cranny
we took our leisure
to hurry would have been sinful and dread
the light afternoon rain our constant
as we investigated
dimpled skin and lovely avenues
all things surely must end
and, as we prepared to quit paradise
rain gave us a quick heavy shower
cleansing us of our curious

©January 27, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-01-27 09:30 AM

very sensual Jerry..My Goodness!!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-27 09:36 AM

Thanks, Lori. Rain will do that sometimes

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2012-01-27 07:38 PM

WOW!!! Very passionate! I don't really like rain especially the freezing rain we are having right now here in Maine. Well a warm summer rain in August....I just might try that. Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-27 07:48 PM

Appreciate the read and comments, Kat. I imagine the rain in Maine is cold, but heck, it could be snow. Actually I'd prefer snow to a cold rain. Thanks again, and give that August rain a chance one of these days.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2012-01-28 12:05 PM

another WOW from me - oh my this is one of those that set your heart racing as your swept away feeling very voyeuristic as you follow the lines - well penned indeed my friend

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-28 05:04 AM

I appreciate your words concerning "Rain," tracie66, You are very kind.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

7 posted 2012-01-28 07:44 AM

Ohhhh mercy.

I was going to say something more, perhaps even eloquent...but nope, I seem to have lost my words. lol

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-28 07:54 AM

Haha! THAT was quite eloquent enough for this old guy, Nicole, and thank you so much for the response.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

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