Open Poetry #48 |
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Wanderlust |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
![]() Uploaded with ImageShack.us I saunter within my own silhouette. We have grown old have moved closer to the other. It's at times such as this I realize my silhouette and I are becoming as one. That's quite frightening to tell the truth, and I have a thing about telling the truth. There's a doomsday feeling of dread that someday when the silhouette and I totally become as one; death visits. A wanderer for much of my life, looking for answers to my screaming questions. No one paid any attention, so I wandered in the madness of the moment, stuck in the middle of dead-end streets and numbed insanity. I was wrong. I was right. I walked alone, disillusioned and jaded. I still wander, not on hot, dusty roads as back then. I wander the Internet. Not the same as my old wandering days still, it satisfies a wanderlust. Plus, I'm warm in the winter, cool in the summer. Didn't used to be that way. I love my life. I love my former life, with all the pitfalls it threw in front of me. I won some. I lost more. I'm still here, not drooling. That my friend, is the ultimate wandering man ©April 8, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Wonderful...I too would live it all again with the joy and the pain...it has made me who I am...I feel this poem...I too have wandered from one end of my country to the other and lived an interesting life...still there are many who call me too innocent and much too truthful...A great read... |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
A well thought introspection, and I like the image too ![]() Amaryllis |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Loved it! Very thought provoking. Kat >^..^< |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, Jerry, keep at it; much enjoyed this one too..>>spiros ~~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Enjoyed Who knows what tomorrow may bring Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
A fellow wanderer is good to find, Startime, sometimes being innocent and too truthful is a perfect match up. Thank you for being here. <><><><> Appreciate the nice thoughts, Amaryllis. <><><><> Any time a poet can write something thought-provoking, Kat, is worth the time and effort in writing it. Thanks. <><><><> Thank you Spiros, for your kind thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
True. Very true, Michael. Thank you for reading and commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
who ever would have thought you would have made it this far and in this good of shape to tell the tale. Good job my friend! Lori ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Lori. I never thought it for one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're always one step ahead if you realize you are not drooling. Except when it comes to exceptional food. Drooling is then allowed. ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh-Heh Yeah you're right Karilea, and exceptional women, don't leave them out. Heh-Heh again . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jerry Aren't we all wanderers in some way or other? Reminds me of the old Gilbert O'Sullivan song, "Alone Again Naturally" Ya just had to put that drool line in didn't ya? Damn, my shirt's damp again. Excellent write Jerry. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha!! Yeah, Eric, the drool had to come, you be careful now. Yep, I think everyone wanders in their own special way, man. And that Gilbert O'Sullivan song just hits just the right spot. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
nice comparison |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, ponderthepoetorrsx. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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