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Open Poetry #48

Into My Open

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-04-24 10:37 AM

You fell into my open
as I was slowly exposing
facets to the sun
Your looking got lost
wrapped in my innuendo
daring your imagination
Smiling your distracted
at my unabashed
I couldn’t help but notice
your nodding appreciation
of my descriptive
into your scenic
So I lingered
a moment longer
in your eye’s embrace

LGR©4/24/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-24 10:39 AM

And he was lost in that eye embrace I imagine. Nice work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-04-24 10:44 AM

maybe so...Thanks Jerry!

Lori

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-04-24 11:08 AM

To linger in his eyes embrace...very beautiful...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-04-24 12:00 PM

Thanks Startime! Glad you liked it

Lori

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