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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-04-23 05:15 AM

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Write for me a novel.
In any era, century not important.
Just have plenty of mania;
Love juices and love beads.

Set the story in faraway places,
under starlight and different moons.

Call the story
The Late, Great God.

This is a personal thing for me,
The story and the New York Public Library
Where lions are forever on guard.

©April 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-04-23 08:12 AM

I hope this poem is part of a series my friend because I'm wanting more!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-23 08:23 AM

It could be, we'll see. Thanks, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-04-23 08:56 AM

This has a remarkable amount of magnetism, Jerry!

It is inspiring too. Ah, to be able to write a novel (I once began one and I am stuck right there after the 1st chapter ...)!

I know you have written quite an impressive number of novels. And this looks like being the starting point for your next one.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-04-23 09:02 AM

Every novel must be borne from a tiny seed of thought, Margherita, and maybe this is just that seed. Thank you for your confidence and for just being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-04-23 10:44 AM

JP, I agree with Lori and Margherita.
Looks like the beginng of a good story, my friend.
May more ideas sprout, like the many weeds on my lawn, lol. Enjoying your poetry, ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-04-23 11:02 AM

Sorry about the weeds on your lawn, ms. E, and thank you for comparing my ideas with them. Heh-Heh I appreciate you being here . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

7 posted 2012-04-23 05:21 PM

You always leave a sort of mystique in your writings, always leaving the reader wanting more. Im never disappointed glad i stopped back missed you all!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2012-04-23 06:46 PM

I'm gonna try. sigh.

You prolific people make me feel so defeated at times, though.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-04-23 06:52 PM

I am so happy to see you back, dreamgal, and I try to entertain and treat my soul with poetry that tries . . .

<><><><>

Karen, hush yo mouf / You are one of the MOST prolific poet around . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2012-04-24 12:00 PM

A great beginning...I will be watchin for more...

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2012-04-24 12:05 PM

Everyone expects more, Startime, so I suppose I will have to try and give them more.

Thank you for your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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