Open Poetry #48 |
Magic Doodles |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Uploaded with ImageShack.us On my wall I have some doodles, Don't you laugh, it beats a poodle. What makes these doodles such a prize, Each one is crammed with its disguise. You look at one a certain way, A naked woman's there, ole! But walk away, take another look, A mermaid's swimming in a brook. There's a portrait of the true God, Another look, deep throat facade. Above left eye, a dragon's fire, Near the nose a fairy inspires. In lower left a witches tent, To the right fingers clutch torment. I love my doodles, they are strange, Come back later, everything's changed. The one who scratched the doodles out, She's good people I'm here to shout. (c)April 21, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
i enjoyed it reminds me a bit of the poem i just posted (mainly since i felt i wanted to share something but had no one to share with ) yolilitzli |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, yolilitzli, and yes, we post our poems looking to share with the like-minded. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Strange, yes, but cute, the doodle and your matching words, Jerry. Sometimes indeed it is a matter of a second when one suddenly discovers the hidden objects. But if someone asks you "can you see the fairy here?" ... when we must see it we can't see it. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, you are so right, Margherita . I am amazed at the tings I still constantly "see" and I have had this particular doodle for a few months at least. Amazing talent put this together, doodle or not. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I laughed at 'Ole!' That is some.impressive art, did you do it yourself, Jerry? Its much more than a 'doodle' Fun poem to go with, also. Best to you- Amaryllis |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, JP, did you do this doodle? Cool doodle and poem to match. ms. e |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh no, Amaryllis , I didn't do this doodle, no way could i do something like this. <><><><> Thanks, ms. e, no, this came from someone else, I can only dream I had the talent to work something like this up. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool Jerry! I swear you come up with the neatest stuff! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That is nice of you to say, Lori, thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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