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Old Man of the Seasons
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Old Man of the Seasons |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
Old man of the cold season when your eyes close can you not expose your ears to the songs of birds that sing at the birth of springtime Can you not feel the warmth of the sun that dress the earth with flowers of beauty and decorate trees with green When you sleep, you miss the beauty of springtime you miss her mantle of flowers the warm, smiling sunshine the song of bees that echo in chambers of daffodils. Old man of the cold season why can’t you linger to witness the miracle-birth of spring? It’s so beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful emotions in this. Much enjoyed. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wow....I like this Very much! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is so beautiful... the words and the springtime mornings. M |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I wish he was sleeping right now..he is very much awake in north central Pa. But you poem speaks of what is normal, and well, I need to add.. I enjoyed reading it, love the ways it sings of old man winter. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"Old man of the cold season", chooses his time to hear, to feel, to see the beauty in Spring. Enjoying your poetry, Ron. Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
He's (old man winter) been gone a while now, from here (South East Texas) and I'm actually missing him with the temperatures going up and the humidity closing in ... very nice write, my friend. Enjoyed, j. [This message has been edited by jwesley (04-12-2012 11:05 PM).] |
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rabittlover Junior Member
since 2012-04-07
Posts 46 |
Love your poem on the birth of spring |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Yes...this is wonderful...I love spring... |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
Thank you all for your kind responses. They are very much appreciated. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I enjoy your poetry very much, Ron. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It is beautiful and this is a good idea transposed into a poet's view. Very enjoyable read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful write, here Amaryllis |
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