Open Poetry #48 |
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just for you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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i like it that you can see me the way I am; diaphanous and idled hands fingers in wing circle like red hawks in threes across my chest-- I'm not thinking - just a flout of crest, trailing proud less down and swerving up malingering in between where your head should find some rest in service of myself and love is-not-what-I-am-thinking-of... and no, I smile, not even lust... just the breeze and my goosebumps in gentle protest following my nails (they're buffed) and gleaming in the glimpse of sun in set, a still-shot camera (six o'clock} reaching through my lids and dreams those colors were just born: (as if) my beckoning created hues just for you. Yeah. Just for you. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is wonderful! Yeah just wonderful! Lori ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lori, you are so very sweet. (You should know though, I only willingly see the sun rise, or set. Everything in between sucks.) ![]() thank you lovie ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Taking the words and arranging them just so, just so they mean everything (and sometimes nothing) is a fine-crafted art. You have that art. This speaking-to-the-dear-one poem has finesse written all over it. You, as you do so very often, expose yourself and stand naked among your words and phrases. Good to see that you have come back to us. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*smile* When it comes to poetry, naked is all there is. (My pink dress was taken away, too, and the crinoline? Was scratchy, the white stockings wouldn't stay up, and my bow was always askance...) ![]() ![]() |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Great to read you again dear lady, it's been awhile. Here I go again trying to relate your poetry to thoughts of how I percieve it. Funny with you I have always tried to get the true meaning of your sometime's not so clear poetry. With this one I think I better keep my thoughts too myself before I get censored. My favorite part is this...Paul where your head should find some rest in service of myself and love is-not-what-I-am-thinking-of... ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sucking can be a really good thing, my friend, especially with lolly-pops, Dreamsicles and snowballs. Good Malts (the old Dairy Queen kind) through a straw too!! Sonic Drive-in, in my area (Oak Ridge North, TX) now have the best malts! Smile, my friend... j. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
...bon-bon M'Lady? ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now I want bon bons too...argh. *laughing* I have some pomegranite tea, though, and a good book. Sometimes I just have to make do. ![]() Thank you all for teething. ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sometimes a good ol lingering hug is better than anything else on the planet. It just does it all with no words said although these are great words penned here which I enjoyed in the verisimilitude of many personal landscapes but all the while I have a big hug for you sweetie! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I can't explain it but you always write poetry that I couldn't stop reading if I wanted to, Karen. Ida |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
My eyes are not what they used to be. At first I thought you said you had pornogranite tea. Immediately, I wondered if your cup runneth over. ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I am so happy you are writing.I will not attempt to read into this.I just love to read anything you write. My old brain is nowhere up to yours and so I no longer try to understand the all of it. I love the words and how you place them and how they sound to me,enough to want to see you writing more often so we who love you can read your words. jo |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I love your poetry too Serenity! Would love to hear you read it aloud. Ms. E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love the way you have with words and join the others in saying I want to read more...beautiful writting... |
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