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Open Poetry #48

Robert Burns Hates Me Now

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2012-04-13 05:06 PM

O, my love’s got a red, red nose,
That’s stuffed from Spring til June.
O, my lover’s wheeze, a melody
That’s played in phlegm and gloom.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2012-04-13 05:35 PM

LOL - Didn't know I was your love, my friend . . . but I sure have ALL the symptoms!!!

Enjoyed...

j.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2012-04-13 07:13 PM

.

Reminded me . . .
Didn’t Shakespeare write something
about his love that on the face of it
was derogatory?

John

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-04-13 10:21 PM

Thanks, guys.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2012-04-16 09:23 PM

I like this one. Made me smile. I am also partial to short poems

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-04-16 09:49 PM

Thanks, Juju. I figure if I bore someone with a really short poem, at least I didn't bore them long.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2012-04-17 03:41 AM

This gave me a chuckle, Nan. This applies to half the people I know at the time of year.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2012-05-06 01:27 AM

Nan, you made me laugh. Thank you.

A

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2012-05-06 01:45 PM

Sounds like Robert's antics such as they were, he and all his flirtations and drinking.
Great stuff.....made me smile....

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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