Open Poetry #48 |
brandied peaches |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
echoes of brandied peaches reading each snapshot greedily pregnant with the unexpected poetically interlined with tune without which we would have no idea nor hear sounds of the lute which sings an emotional communication silent whispers of nothing, yet I hear its sweetness brandied peaches dwells in the deep heart of faith thankful for that great vision of breathe alive in a handful of rocks strumming all those yesterdays deep cornucopia of exercise running through my fingers and I can't keep it from dying and sad to see it go…as I wave… good-bye good-bye memoir of life watching with innocent eyes a privet moment with blue nights orchestrating rotations in some akashic record brandied peaches… narrating a tale turning, turning, turning and desire glows like hot coals pointing a camera into the shadows soothing an ill fated longing like a lover is close full of virtues at the expense of barbed wire restraints and yet the song continues… it skips along and I can say nothing but Ohhhh Lord and smile remembering |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Smile on, smile on. This is a wonderful write LJ. Heart touching, as you do so well. Enjoyed. I love it! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"...soothing an ill fated longing like a lover is close full of virtues at the expense of wire restraints..." So descriptive, so enjoyed, Ms. E |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
loved the movement in this, LeeJ~*~nice visuals too!
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
..."it skips along and I can say nothing but Ohhhh Lord and smile remembering..." Awesome, as usual... j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
..."it skips along and I can say nothing but Ohhhh Lord and smile remembering..." Awesome, as usual... j. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
AWESOME |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love the way it skips along...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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