Walking home in the Spring

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Open Poetry #48

Walking home in the Spring

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2012-04-12 04:57 PM

It rain that day
like a bright dream, flowers,
trees, clouds all pure in
their beautiful attire. My
socks soaked from warm rain puddles,
I admire below my feet natures
collage of fallen leaves glazed
by the rain. There was a mixture of
dark clouds and the sunshower that
comes when it is please or during
a fox's wedding is what I was
told. The air is filled with
watery nectar, much stronger and
sweeter by the tongue. A little
mist hovers, capturing
little lights of the sun,
making everything
glow
showing innocent colors as the
rain heads off to
another place, making
a dream
brighten.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
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1 posted 2012-04-13 04:55 AM

Lovely work, Ken. You captured some of Spring's atmospheres very well.

Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2012-04-13 06:44 AM

I like poems that make me feel that I am part of the experience--this is one of them.
Thank you

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-04-13 10:24 AM

Enjoyed the walk through your Spring poem.
Ms. E

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