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Long Shadow Songs |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Golden light fills the fields and trees Bird songs fill the air Trills and tweets whistles and chirps flying to and fro Redwing black birds sing on the wing A pheasant crows Meadowlarks hidden heard The choir grows with voices clear singing the sun down LGR©4/11/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
My head is reeling with all the singing, but it is a good reeling. Nice poetry, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
I found this poem a joyful one to read but when I read it silently it didn't flow for me. However, when I read it aloud and placed imaginary commas and full stops where my mind wanted them to be, the poem flowed beautifully. It's a teriffic poem. I love nature poetry and write quite a lot of them myself, mostly free verse and without punctuations. I use stressed words to end a line and line breaks instead of commas and spaces between lines for full stops. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have captured all the charm of twilight time, a delightful concert. Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Your poem is like a song... a bird song. Enjoyed Lori, ms. e |
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