Open Poetry #48 |
4th and vellum lane |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
packing those boxes with empty things wrapped in bubble wrap and tissue so the bulges would appear bigger and in theory lighten the load since there was more nothing than something spilled onto the ground then causing discoloration of the otherwise making it look soft and soggy perhaps like one could fall into it quite easily if it were to spread more quickly beyond my boundaries which I always kept mobile dangling from sticks that were attached to strings that went outward from center in no preassigned direction other than out and around the corners of more comfortable shoes are not needed when crossing love street __________________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Some days you make me think too much! M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs...make that little wrinkle come above your eyebrows? thanks ms |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A packing up, and leaving A situation...one moves out Because of intolerance, but does not realize what is left behind. Liberals are sometimes hard to live with, When you are not used to being with someone who doesnt like to fight. One with mobile boundries,that does not need Preasigned directions to enable them to walk across love street and stand together on same side. Thats my take on it........ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Iceman ...close I suspect, but only packing up the baggage of self assessment and putting it in an invisible storage locker so I can have access to it if I ever need an excuse not to cross love street. If ya carry too much dew dew (grin) ya never take the chance again for fear you will be run over by a steam roller with flat tires. Thanks bromigo |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
You're better at packing than I am. lol (that might sound bad to others, but I know you know what I'm talking about - which is all that really matters) I don't use bubble wrap though, I pack things with glue. haha, silly moppet |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Moppet...I can dissolve glue with my monkey spit and Forrest Gump universal shake and break marble polishing tool. Thanks for the eyes |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed the read, my friend, as with most of yours... j. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JW thanks amigo. I appreciate the views. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. You don't seem to believe me, but really, reading you is like Chinese Food... *noms* and...HUNGRY. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Serene..gives you the "runs" and leaves bamboo splinters in your tongue? Geeze I am so glad you love me..grins |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
plugging that addy into my GPS as we speak...LOL.. <3 ****laughing out loud @ Icy's comment: quote: yes, we are! This is the stuff that sticks to your ribs~*~*~loved it, Darkie <3
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't know where you were going... but from the first line, I knew I'd follow willingly. LOL And I'm glad I did... I love this, DS... even if I forgot the bubble wrap and ended up with shards and splinters. *S* |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I keep my "junk" in jars to be opened and viewed when I feel strong enough to look...I color my jars and the one that is black and red with a lock on it makes me fear the most...this poem is great...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBBel1e, thanks knotty daughter..you smile me. __ Ms Suthern, thank you lady friend ____ Ms Star, thank you for the blessed eyes ms |
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