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Open Poetry #48

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-04-05 05:42 AM

lace up her heart
even as you unzip her thoughts
brush your shiny crowns
be ready for her baubles of fondle
hug-nuzzle her mountains and valleys
her engorged metaphors
smell the earth woman
amid unknown curls
dripping with heaven sent
this extraordinary
layer of unforgettable fire-in-the-belly
you would leave home for
turn well to your worn-out phrases
and rest your seeking in her comfort zone

©April 4, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-04-05 08:44 AM

This is lovely, I especially like your last line.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-05 08:52 AM

Thank you, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-04-05 09:09 AM

I enjoyed your description of woman, JP.
Smiles, Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-04-05 09:22 AM

Thank you much, Ms. E, I am happy that you approve.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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