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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-03-26 05:43 AM

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You call forth magical seances
From the cosmos
To pay homage to what it does infer
You call it perpetuity
As it mumbles words you don't understand
Of images sweet

Your body throbs
As it makes its way toward
The radiance
Believing you have spoken to the gods
The "other" gods
You stand, shimmering with bewilderment
A tremble courses throughout you
As you conceive and understand that which you know
Nape hairs stand upright in search of your lovers' kiss

(c)March 10, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Death is a common weed: requires no rain. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-26-2012 08:11 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-03-26 11:34 AM

"Nape hairs stand upright in search of your lovers' kiss"

Nice write, Jerry.
Love this line.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-26 11:40 AM

Thanks, JL. On your poem about your parents, I was short, but it touched me and I didn't know what else to write.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-03-26 07:32 PM

Great pic! the poem is magic

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-26 08:02 PM

Thank you, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2012-03-26 08:46 PM

"Believing you have spoken to the gods
The "other" gods"

Awesome line for this poem..
I think this is the best one in it.

You can't think lascivious thoughts with the
"regular" God around..
I am told that anyway.

You are on your game with this one, Jerry.
A three pointer from 30 ft. out

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-03-26 08:52 PM

WoW! A thirty-footer, Ice, that's the best. Thanks . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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