Open Poetry #48 |
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Virgin Snowdrops |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
VIRGIN SNOWDROPS there was once a garden in ancient times where snow had fallen on meadow land a lady weeping, wanting flowers was soothed by an angel from heaven, grand the angel breathed a magical breath on flakes of falling snow and the lady watched when flakes were planted and beautiful snowdrops began to grow innocent, sweet, and honey scented they rose above the green white and pure, as pure as virgins with pearly heads bowing to the morning sun, supreme [This message has been edited by Ron63 (03-23-2012 08:46 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
![]() Legends and myths make for lovely dream pillows. Enjoyed, Ron63. Thank you! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
And your snowdrop poem is as magical as the angel's breath in the poem. Owl |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed the snow flowers you painted, well done. Ms. E |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the angel breathed a magical breath on flakes of falling snow and the lady watched when flakes were planted and beautiful snowdrops began to grow What a lovely tale you've told! Beautiful write... and perfect for spring! ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very well done. I could envision its unfolding... JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am liking your poetry, Ron. Ida |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Simply stated and delicate, just as the context of the poem. Very lovely.. |
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