Open Poetry #48 |
Ava's Here |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
She makes her entrance in a tutu, a big pink bow in her hair. Does a little twirl just to say, "I'm here!" She delivers the news like an ace reporter. Her smile lights up the room. I know she'll have everyone laughing very soon. Then she'll settle down to more serious matters... like her lunch and her jigsaw puzzle, sprinkled with a little girlie chatter. Ida Werrett |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Ida! This is precious! I can see girlie Ava twirling away with big smiles comming from her grandmother. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ava is my great granddaughter. She is 4 and a showy, feminine little Aries child who keeps everyone entertained with her unique personality. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Ida. Ava conquered the hearts around her and through your beautiful words she conquers ours too. Give her a hug from across the world. Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
She sounds a darling, Ida! Her name is very similar to yours. That bodes very well for her. Owl |
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Amaryllis2 Junior Member
since 2013-12-08
Posts 27 |
Charming and fun! |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Awww, missed this the first time around. Very, very cute and wonderfully written. t paints a full color picture of Ava's entrance. ~*~ Old is when “getting a little action” means you don't need to take any fiber today. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so chaming ia, o thought immediatly to your granddaughter before reading comments, the poem shows the grace of she, have a nice day yann |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, I love this poem. You shared Ava's innocence and confidence in such a delightful way. Merry Christmas. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for letting me share my little Ava with you. Merry Christmas to all. Haven't seen you here for a while, Alison. Glad to see you back. Ida |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Merry Christmas to you and your great-granddaughter as well Ida ... she sounds adorable! Much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cute isn't the right word for this ... doesn't say enough. But I loved it. j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing this Ida, Kids brighten the day for sure! Enjoyed! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
this brings smiles...thank you |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Brings back such wonderful memories of my daughter ~ Enjoyed |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ava is a special child because she is your great granddaughter.I felt a smile spread across my face just reading this. Enjoy her. Jo |
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