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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2013-12-13 03:14 PM

My love for you - it never fades,
It glitters in all hues and shades;
It shines a light on shadows cast
By doubt and fear and remnant past.

But no dam will hold the river
Of my heart; no clamps the quiver
Of its beat - but where’s the fuel
That feeds this ever constant rule?

It's in the jewel of your heart:
'Tis there my love did take its start;
'Tis there the flint did strike the stone,
Sent fire to my flesh and bone.

Should my will ever wane its might,
My soul be ever without light --
Then I shall peer into your eyes
And feel the flames of Paradise.

CG

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-12-13 03:25 PM

Excellent rhyming in this poets' passionate declaration.

~*~ Old is when “getting a little action” means you don't need to take any fiber today. ~*~

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2013-12-13 03:34 PM

Good great and yet? Also passionate

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-12-13 09:53 PM

Romanticism most fine ...

love the last two lines in particular!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-12-14 10:59 AM

Wonderfully romantic and display of devotion! Heart warming! Much enjoyed!

Lori

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2013-12-14 11:03 AM

so romantic daclaration and gracious images, thanks for the lovely write and "gift"

have a nice day

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2013-12-14 12:29 PM

Wonderful romanticism and very well orchestrated rhymes indeed. A joy to read.

Margherita

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2013-12-14 09:31 PM

lovely

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2013-12-15 03:23 AM

Thank you everyone so much for stopping by and for the words of appreciation and the positive comments - means so much to me.

CG

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2013-12-28 08:08 PM

Nice thoughts on love...James

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