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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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Release The chains, they strike the ground, As you look to the sky... And though you don't have wings, You're sure that you can fly. You speak, but make no sound. It's taken by the wind. And though darkness still sings, You no longer pretend It's all you hear as you listen— All you see as you stare, With eyes freshly awakened To what's always been there. And it's a strange sensation To not fall through the cracks; With all that life has taken, To find you can relax. The words, they cut your soul, And yet granted release. You close your eyes at night In an aura of peace. The pain has lost control. Your eyes, they finally see There's no reason to fight A man you'll never be. The cost, it has been paid. The time, it has been served. A truth ever untold, 'Twas more than you deserved. But of promises made You still have mind to keep, Though most you held was sold, You're dreams weren't priced so cheap. And you're the architect Of the dream you walk through, When you but realize There's nothing you can't do. The ache, fallen suspect, If once priceless and dear; I shall not aggrandize, And no more will revere. Michael Anderson 11/25/2013 |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
So much meaning Richard |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It feels as if a regeneration is taking place, dear Michael. Eyes that see more clearly because they stop to judge. A heart in peace creates room for new energy of love. Exquisitely written. Margherita |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
From the title, through to the very last line, this is beautiful Michael. You've captured that understanding and snapshot in time of a recognition that allows encouragement and hope to flow through beyond the dark. I loved this.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
I have no words to comment this, Michael! Stunning! |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
Michael! Your poetry deeply speaks to me! And effects my own heart! You write well, with deep conviction, thought, and truly some real felt experience! I've been tossed as of late and find your own words relate to my current tumult! Cheers!!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"Release", a powerful Poem. Well done my friend. Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's a lot to be said for "Release". Michael. Lovely writing. Ida |
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Amaryllis2 Junior Member
since 2013-12-08
Posts 27 |
I love the message here! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing as always...James |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What a blessing this is! I feel as if I just watched you cross the finishline to a grueling marathon or reach the top of a mountain! Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Erupting explosive tears of joy for you and yours, Michael. Owl |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Excellent writing... You bring a greater understanding to the reader ~ |
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