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Open Poetry #48

candle prayer

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2013-12-12 04:53 PM

Flickering light,
Fiery white,
Blazing wick,
Burning stick.

Dark so sweet,

Gentle heat,

Rhythmic breath,

A flicker,
A flare,
Fiery white.

Richard

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-12-12 05:21 PM

Candles can do that to ya . . .

~*~ Old is when “getting a little action” means you don't need to take any fiber today. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2013-12-12 06:02 PM

I really liked this, Richard... my dark soul was crying for "peaceful death" to be the endline, (my fiery white having burned out long ago), but you make me recall those brighter days vividly.

Michael

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