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Gale
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0 posted 2013-12-11 08:25 PM


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You love bright colours the way
You’re fond of this life on Earth
The happiest man you stay
Regardless of pain
Because
You always shared your smile
Your dream of freedom and peace
And tried to reconcile
The planet torn into pieces
You struggled not for your sake
It’s taken so much to stand
But honour and love could make
Your foe become your friend
And people will not forget
The shine of beloved eyes
For generous deeds beget
The legend that never dies

.

12/12/2013

.

© Copyright 2013 Galina Italyanskaya - All Rights Reserved
paderewski
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1 posted 2013-12-11 10:46 PM


Mandela. He did overcome. You have to give credit for that.

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

Gale
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2 posted 2013-12-12 12:10 PM


I give, Jerry.
I don't know what you meant, but this is about him.
Thank you for reading!

OwlSA
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3 posted 2013-12-12 05:12 AM


Thank you, Galina, and for your wonderful, warm, supportive emails.

Tears
Owl

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2013-12-12 05:53 AM


"But honour and love could make
Your foe become your friend"...so true

Lovely words...

M

Gale
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5 posted 2013-12-12 06:23 AM


Thank you, Nakdthoughts!
Thank you, Diana!
He deserves more.

Michael
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6 posted 2013-12-12 05:30 PM


A wonderful and fitting tribute, Galina.  Though gone, indeed he will always stay.

Michael

Margherita
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7 posted 2013-12-12 06:13 PM


From the title I felt it was for him. Very beautiful and sensitive tribute to a man who showed the WAY!

Love and peace,
Margherita

ponderthepoetorrsx
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8 posted 2013-12-12 06:29 PM


Fitting
CastleGuard
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9 posted 2013-12-12 06:39 PM



Well done, Gale, there should be more men like him...

CG

Amaryllis2
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10 posted 2013-12-12 11:06 PM


Absolutely beautiful tribute
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2013-12-13 08:54 AM


This is a lovely tribute Gale. Beautifully written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gale
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12 posted 2013-12-13 09:09 AM


Thank you all for reading and commenting!
I'm touched deeply.

latearrival
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13 posted 2013-12-13 10:27 PM


Gale I read you often and quietly  enjoy your words. This post, I had to say Thank You, for it is indeed fitting to the man. B
est to you. Jo Perry

Gale
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14 posted 2013-12-14 12:17 PM


Thank you very much, Jo!
It's very kind of you to say that )

Thank everyone for reading!
And I want to say, that your comments support me in writing enormously.

Rex Allen McCoy
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15 posted 2013-12-26 08:08 AM


A beautiful tribute... May the seeds of his words and deeds continue to grow and bloom
~

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2013-12-26 07:20 PM


very nice...James
OLIAS
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17 posted 2013-12-26 10:23 PM


Cool write, for a great man, much enjoyed thank you for sharing

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Gale
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18 posted 2013-12-27 09:57 AM


Rex,
James,
Joe,
thank you for reading and replying!

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