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Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

0 posted 2013-12-11 04:47 PM

A gentle call -

Come, sit with me
by snapping cinders tonight

wrapped in wool
and memories

We'll let the snow
turn blue with dusk

and remember who we were

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

1 posted 2013-12-11 05:02 PM

"wrapped in wool
amd memories"
really hits home overall good poem

Richard

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

2 posted 2013-12-11 06:16 PM

Ahhh . . . What a very special poem as you think of your loved one, martyjo, very special indeed.

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

3 posted 2013-12-11 07:45 PM

Nope it's just me, Sharon. I lost my original 'Amaryllis' pw so had to make this new one

Thank you though, Jerry

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-12-11 11:51 PM

A lovely poem, Amaryllis. I would love to come sit with you.
Ida

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2013-12-12 03:47 AM

Much enjoyed your poem, Amaryllis!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2013-12-12 05:56 AM

I love this!!!

and would love to add this as a mini quilted poem ornament for my tree this year. Your words have a special meaning to me this year.

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2013-12-12 12:45 PM

Absolutely wonderful and delightfully creative, dear Amaryllis. So good to have the opportunity again to read your works!

Love,
Margherita

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2013-12-12 03:35 PM

Ooohhh! I love the snapping cinders!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2013-12-12 04:37 PM

Warm, but with a chill.
Enjoyed.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

10 posted 2013-12-12 06:20 PM

Ooh, I really liked the ending to this. Sometimes I really could use a reminder.

Michael

Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

11 posted 2013-12-12 10:50 PM

Gosh...want to thank everyone who's commented on this little poem. .. Your words are surely appreciated!

Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

12 posted 2013-12-12 10:56 PM

Ps: nakedthoughts, I would be honored if you chose one of my works for your poem quilt! Such a neat idea and I would be pleased to be included

Thank you!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2013-12-13 09:10 AM

"wrapped in wool
and memories"

You've painted a beautiful picture here with your words Amaryllis. Lovely phrasing, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

14 posted 2013-12-14 05:11 AM

It's good to see you and your beautiful poetry back here again, Amaryllis.

Owl

Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

15 posted 2013-12-14 09:16 AM

Many thanks, Kit and Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2013-12-27 07:34 PM

enjoyed...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

17 posted 2013-12-29 01:50 PM

for you~~

Thanks

M

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

18 posted 2013-12-29 09:12 PM

cozy

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