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paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2013-12-03 06:32 AM

it was raining torrents
we stood there
notwithstanding
and she . . .
with her sweet tongue's effort
cleansed my past
put a voodoo charm on me
teased my blushing
with a silken moist trace
a ruffled whisper
and a kiss which bonded
like no other
caused my stalwart to falter
nearly giving way
her lips left my own
in a mad fluttering of need
touched, but unfulfilled
I shivered, reached for her fantastic
she was boldly outgoing
enfolded me inside her unusual
and kiss by tender kiss she fed me her adorable
I felt myself glowing
with delight and ecstasy
it made me incredibly complete
before I'd been empty
now I surrendered to the
emancipation of my passion
she brought me from then to now
sharing love in the midst of
a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm

©December 2, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-12-03 10:37 AM

WOW Paddy! I love it when you use this style! Outstandingly romantic too!

Lori

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

2 posted 2013-12-03 10:43 AM

Thank you very much Lori. I like the style also. It is harder to compose than straight free style, and that gives me more pleasure, which is a good thing.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-12-03 02:49 PM

fine 'voodoo' Romanticism, J.P.

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

4 posted 2013-12-03 02:52 PM

Awww . . . Thanks to you, Bruce, I appreciate the comment.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-12-03 08:11 PM

spellbinding romance ! with a twist of something different !

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

6 posted 2013-12-03 09:24 PM

Thank you Emma, so very much. I just love it when you talk to me like that. Heh.Heh

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2013-12-04 08:58 PM

Oh so thats what you romantics do when theirs a rainstorm in Louisiana...James

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

8 posted 2013-12-04 09:02 PM

You betcha, James. Why let a perfectly good thunderstorm go to waste. Thank you for being here.

~*~ But I have promises to keep, / And miles to go before I sleep.--Frost ~*~

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