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paderewski
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0 posted 2013-12-03 06:32 AM



it was raining torrents
we stood there
notwithstanding
and she . . .
with her sweet tongue's effort
cleansed my past
put a voodoo charm on me
teased my blushing
with a silken moist trace
a ruffled whisper
and a kiss which bonded
like no other
caused my stalwart to falter
nearly giving way
her lips left my own
in a mad fluttering of need
touched, but unfulfilled
I shivered, reached for her fantastic
she was boldly outgoing
enfolded me inside her unusual
and kiss by tender kiss she fed me her adorable
I felt myself glowing
with delight and ecstasy
it made me incredibly complete
before I'd been empty
now I surrendered to the
emancipation of my passion
she brought me from then to now
sharing love in the midst of
a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm

©December 2, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-12-03 10:37 AM


WOW Paddy! I love it when you use this style!  Outstandingly romantic too!

Lori  

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-12-03 10:43 AM


Thank you very much Lori. I like the style also. It is harder to compose than straight free style, and that gives me more pleasure, which is a good thing.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2013-12-03 02:49 PM


fine 'voodoo' Romanticism, J.P.
paderewski
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4 posted 2013-12-03 02:52 PM


Awww . . . Thanks to you, Bruce, I appreciate the comment.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2013-12-03 08:11 PM


spellbinding romance ! with a twist of something different !
paderewski
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6 posted 2013-12-03 09:24 PM


Thank you Emma, so very much. I just love it when you talk to me like that. Heh.Heh

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-12-04 08:58 PM


Oh so thats what you romantics do when theirs a rainstorm in Louisiana...James
paderewski
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8 posted 2013-12-04 09:02 PM


You betcha, James. Why let a perfectly good thunderstorm go to waste. Thank you for being here.

~*~ But I have promises to keep, / And miles to go before I sleep.--Frost ~*~

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