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Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-11-17 07:35 PM

I hear the river trickle past as I sit upon a tree limb
I fear not for I have wings
Finally the wings of freedom
With this came the eyes to see beyond
All I have been taught all the world perceptions
To know now, what most call magic
In this realm I seek only love and light
For I now know that is what we, most are
Some tread the waters of the dark
So I must stay rooted and do lights part
Spreading even with a smile
With my doings not my words
That this light is nothing to fear
It is the core of all beliefs
Just look beyond with closed eyes
And you might just find the soothing of the light

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2013-11-18 02:07 AM

Connie, talking of perceptions, my perceptions of this poem: unique, poetic, inspirational, as uplifting as the wings of an albatross, as beautiful as a dewdrop, as lasting as a diamond, as real as the sun, as memorable one's beliefs, as powerful as the sea, and one that I can relate to very well. Well done! May many read it and benefit as much as I did from it!

Owl

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-11-18 08:31 AM

Worthy of many eyes view to bring more light into the world you know of

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-12-03 08:09 PM

fine writing...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2013-12-10 12:50 PM

"So I must stay rooted and do lights part
Spreading even with a smile
With my doings not my words
That this light is nothing to fear
It is the core of all beliefs
Just look beyond with closed eyes
And you might just find the soothing of the light"...

what can one say to such beautiful writing~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-12-11 07:14 AM

Another of your beautiful poetic offerings, very much enjoyed, dear Connie!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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