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Open Poetry #48

Hawaiian Ghost Story

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-02 09:27 PM

Hawaiian Ghost Story

I met a woman
in Chinatown
she told me she liked me
she showed me around.

She had an apartment
located on King Street
she lived on the second floor
she took me in and locked the door

We drank
some red wine
we shared some
intimate time.

Next morning
we said goodbye
as I departed
she started to cry

I told her
I'd like to see her again
we touched fingers
and promised to be friends.

Two weeks passed
and I returned to Chinatown
I walked all over town
but she wasn't around.

I went to her apartment
upon the second floor
when I knocked
another woman opened the door.

She said the woman I mentioned
hadn't lived there since 2004
she told me she was sorry
as she closed the door.

JamesLee
01March
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-02 09:37 PM

Hah! She did the same damn thing to me, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2012-03-05 07:20 PM

Jerry this is my "Last night at the dance I met Lauri" moment...James

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