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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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0 posted 2013-11-08 02:14 PM



Summer's collapsed ones haunt
both at sea and on land

discoveries of hung over stalks
now destined for ash, on promised
land, where corn once grew kingly

gutted shells deck the shoreline
where I'd skip, undaunted
by trivialities, little
contemplation given to cultural
origin or definition

hence the quest, at this
moment, where routinely
I'd stroll, walking for miles
giddy on moonlight's intoxication

looking over at you, my special
flower, pretty in lace,  with
a center of sweet ivory

but regretfully, with winter to
come, where all becomes universal
in color

I never thought
to have asked your name

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (11-08-2013 04:09 PM).]

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paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
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1 posted 2013-11-08 03:30 PM


Heh.Heh I've forgotten to ask myself from time to time. Gotta love it. Poor little nameless flower.

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Michael
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2 posted 2013-11-09 11:09 AM


Wow, there is so much beneath the surface here.  A beautiful rendering of regret reaching us as we lose something we can only wish lasted longer, or mayhap not taken utterly for granted.  Those little things that end up meaning the most, though most never see them until they're looking back to them.  Beautifully done.

Michael

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2013-11-09 02:24 PM


thanks fellow poets

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2013-11-09 05:33 PM


a 'penning' most fine!
Gale
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5 posted 2013-11-09 06:40 PM


A lovely poem, filled with clear sadness!
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