Open Poetry #48 |
Introspection |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Love is a many splendored thing- I heard one writer say. But this I know, that love, or lust, Will oft the heart betray. A dream, a gossamer delight- That titillates the mind. Will keep one giddy through the night- But at the daybreak find… Regret and shame, likewise remorse- Our ardor in remission- Reality’s harsh light reveals- Commission and omission. To love, to dream… life’s very breath- Yet the end view is so harsh… It steals our joy, and ends in death- Makes memory a farce. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Love is a double edged sword! Enjoyed your poem. Kat >^..^< |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It seems that it's life itself that betrays the heart in the end. Ride it for all it's worth, you know it's gonna buck you soon enough. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice introspection...for my introspection, life is what we make it and what it makes us...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Life is a hard lesson to learn sometimes, John. Well said. Ida |
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