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Forever Anna
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Forever Anna |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I lost her that night even if my hair matched hers brown with a bit of olive oil from the suns gaze I'll never forget how the open air of silence can ease two mates together without a single word. That first morning meet with her eyes piercing the doorway and I looked up innocently, naive, precocious little child She smiled a simple hello sufficed and thats how I met Anna With her hair like a shadows dream and a man whose heart lent his all for the sacrifice to feel something that so few ever feel I felt it I felt it with Anna Maybe she's in a better place now but the pain never stops never stops lingering so maybe I can hide behind the winds draft until I fully recover but for the love of Anna it may take until the day I pass For the greatest beauty of Anna was the silence we shared every evening skin fold, love through the grace of silence. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I do love your poem, Tomer~ There is a saddness entwined in your deep and fullfilling love poem. It tugs at my heart strings in such a way. It is truly beautiful what you wrote!! Your poetry makes me feel, and is always such a pleasure to read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
This does quite effectively pierce my heart with sorrow! |
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