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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-11-03 08:47 AM



Scripture says
Forgive them...
They know not
what they do...
The longer I ponder
upon these words
the more I see it
to be true
How many times myself
haveI heard
my own heart asking
What have I
done?
Getting caught up
in the brambles
of thoughts and emotions
it is all too easy
to lose your way
To take a wrong turn and trip
off an unforgiving cliff
There we find ourselves stuck
trying to find forgiveness
from ourselves
for our mistakes
When what we truly need do
is forgive them
who cannot
forgive us

LGR(C)11/3/13

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paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
Posts 287
Louisiana, USA
1 posted 2013-11-03 08:57 AM


Forgiveness is a much overused word I feel like. Of course there are times when we need forgiveness and times to forgive. I disagree that we only need to forgive those who cannot forgive us, personal forgiveness makes it easy to forgive others.

~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-11-03 09:07 AM


I agree. I found that for myself, it was very hard to forgive myself for things I knew other people couldn't. So forgiving them cleared the path to forgiving myself.
Looking at it from that perspective helped me alot. And your continual reminders about self forgiveness didn't hurt a bit either!
Thanks my friend!

Lori



Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
3 posted 2013-11-04 01:25 PM


A thought-provoking poem.
The more I get known the world the less I find reasons to take offence at anybody in it.
Thank you for sharing, Lori!

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
4 posted 2013-11-06 06:07 PM


it takes a lot to forgive, but the rewards come back in mulititudes of better days

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2013-11-07 09:23 PM


Don't know that I agree with the overall premiss, but I do know when I like something I read.  Well worded, my friend and I enjoyed the read.

j.

Michael
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6 posted 2013-11-09 11:21 AM


One of life's toughest realizations here, Lori, and one few are capable of processing.  You can never earn that forgiveness you so desperately need no matter what kind of self-penalizing penance you may come up with for yourself.  It can only be granted you by a willing, not persuaded heart.  Forgiving those who cannot or will not forgive you is all you can do, lest it eat you up inside.  Great writing.

Michael

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