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Foreshadowing Winter
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Foreshadowing Winter |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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winds foreshadowing winter blasting leaves from their branches pelting them down like hail hurling and swirling the crisp curled colored cascades in a mass migration ahead of the bitter cold and snow LGR(C)11/2/13 |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
You spoke forcefully as you were heralding in old man winter. Nice visuals in this, Lori. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
That wind carries a chill with it... and not just from the cold that's following it. The unstoppable representation life's essence and vibrancy caught up in a period of storm, only to then settle into the grim but peaceful darkness burried beneath all that blissful white snow. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
those first very colorful signs, giving way to the grey stark winter nights, soothe and haunt sweet poem  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine writing ... very effective imagery of Autumn passing into another dark and brooding Winter of discontent ... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you my wonderful friends for your very diverse comments. I feel like this poem has touched a "season" button in you all and evoked a strong response...there is no higher praise. Lori |
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