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Open Poetry #48

At Lake Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-10-22 10:27 PM

At Lake Love

At the
lake of love
I blew a kiss
and it bounced across
the surface of the lake
like a pebble
on the take
and as it lost momentum
it began to float
upon the surface
of the lake
like a love boat
seeking its fate.

In no more
than a magic moment
that two hearts
care to share
my kiss
fell upon the lips
of my sweetheart lips
that was swimming there.

How many lovers
have fallen in love
upon the silky shores
of this lake
of love.

JamesLee
22October
2013

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-10-29 07:16 AM

This is delightful, dear James. A pleasure to read, to say it with your words!

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2013-11-02 08:50 PM

a "lake of Love" ... would that it were so!

VERY pleasant 'write!'

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2013-11-03 07:48 AM

like this James!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

4 posted 2013-11-03 04:18 PM

Nicely written and touching! )
Thank you for sharing, JamesMichael!

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