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Open Poetry #48

As Dawn Takes You

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-10-17 12:38 PM

Moonlit dawn fills the room
As you slip away
Candles full of dripping wax
Remind me of our play
The smell of you still lingers in
The pillow case I hold
My ears still ring of love words
Sing and of stories told of old

The youth in me is released
When I think of your return
A meal, a feast will be in wait
For calories you will burn
A drink in etched glass goblet
Will moisten your parched lips
When next we meet I'll greet you
with the magic of my kiss

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-10-17 08:36 PM

A lovely poem!
So promissing! )

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-10-18 04:21 PM

very romantic and also sensuous to read

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-10-19 09:08 PM

enjoyed...James

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