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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.

0 posted 2013-10-17 12:38 PM



Moonlit dawn fills the room
As you slip away
Candles full of dripping wax
Remind me of our play
The smell of you still lingers in
The pillow case I hold
My ears still ring of love words
Sing and of stories told of old


The youth in me is released
When I think of your return
A meal, a feast will be in wait
For calories you will burn
A drink in etched glass goblet
Will moisten your parched lips
When next we meet I'll greet you
with the magic of my kiss

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved

© Copyright 2013 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-10-17 08:36 PM


A lovely poem!
So promissing! )

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2013-10-18 04:21 PM


very romantic and also sensuous to read
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-10-19 09:08 PM


enjoyed...James
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